On the sixth line you have done 13 beats , I think you did this because the wind carries on and doesn’t stop so takes a long time.
well done Annabel on the first line it has 11 beats and on the second line it has 7 beats
What a lovely poem. It makes me think of the oak tree in our garden.
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On the sixth line you have done 13 beats , I think you did this because the wind carries on and doesn’t stop so takes a long time.
well done Annabel on the first line it has 11 beats and on the second line it has 7 beats
What a lovely poem. It makes me think of the oak tree in our garden.