10 beats on the first line. 6 beats for line 2. 9 beats on the next. 8 beats for number 4. 10 beats for verse 2 line 1. 11 beats verse 2 line 2. 7 beats for the last line. Maybe line two was shorter because the daughter of the crocodile is short.
11 6 9 8 10 9 11 7 In the first and seventh line you have put 11
sylibles because it talks about the crocodile and the orchard
and a crocodile and an orchard are quite big.
10 beats on the first line. 6 beats for line 2. 9 beats on the next. 8 beats for number 4. 10 beats for verse 2 line 1. 11 beats verse 2 line 2. 7 beats for the last line. Maybe line two was shorter because the daughter of the crocodile is short.
I can see you used alot of beats to explain what happens with all the animals.
11 6 9 8 10 9 11 7 In the first and seventh line you have put 11
sylibles because it talks about the crocodile and the orchard
and a crocodile and an orchard are quite big.
On the 2nd verse on the 3rd line it couldbe long like a Giraffes neck