Toby and Olivers Poem

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2 Responses to Toby and Olivers Poem

  1. Jack says:

    I can see you used 9 8 and 7 beats and I think you did that to tell what a cow does every day.

  2. Lydia Prins says:

    On the 9th line you have put 19 beats , I think you have done this because usaly peaple cry for a long time so that could be why it is long

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