On the first verse on the first the first two stancers are 7 beats long but the 3 stancer is 9 beats long.
Therefore I think that the 3 stancer is 9 beats long because the flies are flying over the wind sheild.
Line 1 has 6 beats. Line 2 has 7 beats. Line 3 has 8 beats. Line 4 has 8 beats too. next line has 11 beats. I think the number goes up because the butterfly takes off and goes up.
The first line has 6 sylblesas . the 2nd line has 7 sylblesas . the 3rd line has 8 sylblesas . the 4th line has 8 sylblesas.
The the first line has a short sentance to make you want to read on and it has a short sentance for inpact .
the 2nd line is stacking up for suspence .
the 3rd line is getting higher and is drawing in the top place ay how many sylbles
the 4th line is closeing down the line
On the third verse you used 2 short sentences to create the reader a vision of a vicious plant
the first one has 7 beats the second line has 6 beats the third line has 8 beats and the last line has 8 beats.
one the first one it is 7 beats second 6 the the third 8 beats fourth one 8 beats.
well done Megan and Aman on your poem the first line has 7 beats and the second line has
6 beats and the third line has 6 beats
why is the one a bit longer because it has 8 lines
On the first verse on the first the first two stancers are 7 beats long but the 3 stancer is 9 beats long.
Therefore I think that the 3 stancer is 9 beats long because the flies are flying over the wind sheild.
In the third verse you have put the first two lines small, I think you have done it because the plant you are talking about it small but strong
Line 1 has 6 beats. Line 2 has 7 beats. Line 3 has 8 beats. Line 4 has 8 beats too. next line has 11 beats. I think the number goes up because the butterfly takes off and goes up.
on the very last line you have put 12 sylablesn because it has so meany words
I think you have used loads of beats to write about lots of animals.
The first line has 6 sylblesas . the 2nd line has 7 sylblesas . the 3rd line has 8 sylblesas . the 4th line has 8 sylblesas.
The the first line has a short sentance to make you want to read on and it has a short sentance for inpact .
the 2nd line is stacking up for suspence .
the 3rd line is getting higher and is drawing in the top place ay how many sylbles
the 4th line is closeing down the line
thers 75 weldone