Mountain story plan

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4 Responses to Mountain story plan

  1. Mrs Arnold says:

    Wow, Adah! You have been busy this week. I love the sound of this story, Coco the friendly bear sounds great! You have thought so carefully about your plot and the adjectives you have come up with are excellent! I hope they all live happily ever after with Coco as their new pet!

    Keep up the good work,

    Mrs Arnold

  2. ABro says:

    thank you

  3. s14jlaishley says:

    Good work Adah. A super story plan and I wish all bears were as friendly as Coco. Well done.

    Mrs Laishley

  4. s14lbird says:

    I love how you have included a vocabulary bank.

    Mrs Bird

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