Well done Lexi. You have worked hard on this at the Hub! I love the level of detail you have included, you have really used your imagination. The story took an unexpected turn when they had to axe a deer, I wasn’t expecting that! You have included lots of fantastic adjectives, well done!
Well done Lexi. You have worked hard on this at the Hub! I love the level of detail you have included, you have really used your imagination. The story took an unexpected turn when they had to axe a deer, I wasn’t expecting that! You have included lots of fantastic adjectives, well done!
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
Good work Lexi. I like the fact you have a moral at the end and it is so true. You have worked hard on your story. Well done.
Mrs Laishley
I love the build up of suspense and drama in your story. Great work!
Mrs Bird