Thank you so much for sharing this Adah. It is an excellent diary entry. You have thought carefully about your adjectives, fronted adverbials, punctuation and paragraphs!
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnld
thank you
Well done Adah. A really descriptive diary entry. I can visual it all. Did the ring have a diamond in it that sparkled?
Mrs Laishley
yes it did
Super work!
Lots of descriptive detail. I could really visualise each part of your diary entry.
Mrs Bird
Thank you
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Thank you so much for sharing this Adah. It is an excellent diary entry. You have thought carefully about your adjectives, fronted adverbials, punctuation and paragraphs!
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnld
thank you
Well done Adah. A really descriptive diary entry. I can visual it all. Did the ring have a diamond in it that sparkled?
Mrs Laishley
yes it did
Super work!
Lots of descriptive detail. I could really visualise each part of your diary entry.
Mrs Bird
Thank you