Well done Isla! You have thought carefully about how to describe Esther finding the ring in the dump. I like how you have included ‘it told a story of happiness.’
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
How lovely Isla. I can hear the happiness in the diary entry coming through as I read it. I wouldn’t want to sell it either. Well done.
Mrs Laishley
Lovely work. I wonder what the story of happiness would be about?
Mrs Bird
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Well done Isla! You have thought carefully about how to describe Esther finding the ring in the dump. I like how you have included ‘it told a story of happiness.’
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
How lovely Isla. I can hear the happiness in the diary entry coming through as I read it. I wouldn’t want to sell it either. Well done.
Mrs Laishley
Lovely work. I wonder what the story of happiness would be about?
Mrs Bird