Amazing improvements Mili! I love your last sentence the best because you used a simile like a rooster and I love the adjectives blue and glistening and shark infested! Brilliant detail!
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Amazing improvements Mili! I love your last sentence the best because you used a simile like a rooster and I love the adjectives blue and glistening and shark infested! Brilliant detail!
Did you know that there is a book called the explorer?