Wow, Charlie! This is brilliant! You have worked so hard and included so much detail here. I am impressed with all the technical words, the colons and the sub-headings so that the information is easy to navigate. You have chosen a good selection of pictures too, great work! Hopefully others will learn a lot from this too!
Amazing work Charlie. You have so much interesting information and detail. I don’t like heights so I don’t think mountain climbing is for me… a hill perhaps instead. Do you think you would enjoy mountaineering Charlie? Keep up the hard work.
Wow, Charlie! This is brilliant! You have worked so hard and included so much detail here. I am impressed with all the technical words, the colons and the sub-headings so that the information is easy to navigate. You have chosen a good selection of pictures too, great work! Hopefully others will learn a lot from this too!
Mrs Arnold
A really detailed equipment list Charlie. Excellent! You’ve included lots of technical vocabulary too.
Mrs Bird
Amazing work Charlie. You have so much interesting information and detail. I don’t like heights so I don’t think mountain climbing is for me… a hill perhaps instead. Do you think you would enjoy mountaineering Charlie? Keep up the hard work.
Mrs Laishley