Mount Everest Ryhme

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6 Responses to Mount Everest Ryhme

  1. Mrs Arnold says:

    Well done Oliver, this is an excellent poem! You have thought really hard about the structure, the verse and rhyme. I like the comparison to a dinosaur.

    Keep up the good work,

    Mrs Arnold

  2. Lily Shields says:

    Well done Ollie

  3. Mrs Bird says:

    I really enjoyed reading your poem Oliver. Great use of structure!

    Super job!

    Mrs Bird

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