Well done James, this is an excellent poem! You have thought carefully about the vocabulary you have used – I love the use of the word ‘vast’. This poem makes me feel happy and calm all at the same time.
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
Very good James xx lily xx
Well done James. I love the upbeat tone to your poem.
Keep working hard!
Mrs Bird
I enjoyed reading your poem, it sounds great!
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Well done James, this is an excellent poem! You have thought carefully about the vocabulary you have used – I love the use of the word ‘vast’. This poem makes me feel happy and calm all at the same time.
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
Very good James xx lily xx
Well done James. I love the upbeat tone to your poem.
Keep working hard!
Mrs Bird
I enjoyed reading your poem, it sounds great!