Poetry

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4 Responses to Poetry

  1. s14rsharma says:

    I really enjoyed doing the poem about the dolphin, and my favourite part of the poem was when the dolphin was doing tricks.
    I could maybe improved by not staying in a dolphin position all the time.
    If I did it again I would probably not stay in the dolphin position all the time, instead I would probably do something like the tale and a waterfall when the dolphin dives.

  2. Mia says:

    My favourite part of the poem was when Raja and Jacob done the shoulder bumps I could improve on reading louder so everybody could hear me. I would be the octopus because your always in shot.

  3. Abbie-Mai says:

    My group acted out a poem about the dolphin.
    We probably could have improved by acting different poses instead of acting the dolphin nearly all the time. My favourite part was acting with all my friends. If i did it again,I would like to do a different poem.

  4. s14mbradley says:

    My one was the star fish. I loved it so much i thought it was funny when Ethan was dooing the flippers and the teacher said it looked like chicken wings. I caught him waching the video of him doing chicken wings so funny, i really enjoyed it though.

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