I really like you writing because i like how you used “The snow snatched everything in it’s way”. Well done for using fronted adverbials, similes, metaphors and new vocabulary. I think in your next piece of writing you should use more brackets, dashes and commas.
Well Done!
From Borys
Hi Zach hope you are having a lovely day.
I really like you writing because i like how you used “The snow snatched everything in it’s way”. Well done for using fronted adverbials, similes, metaphors and new vocabulary. I think in your next piece of writing you should use more brackets, dashes and commas.
Well Done!
From Borys