Well done Dylan! I love how you have written such an exciting and adventurous story, I wonder what will happen next…
You have used lots of different ways to start your sentences, a range of adjectives and have used an excellent conjunction ‘meanwhile’.
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Well done Dylan! I love how you have written such an exciting and adventurous story, I wonder what will happen next…
You have used lots of different ways to start your sentences, a range of adjectives and have used an excellent conjunction ‘meanwhile’.