Amazing sentences Ajay! I am so impressed! Well done! Here are a few corrections:
My friend zach was a very smart and caring. – no semi colon needed. It is just a simple sentence (1 clause). A semi colon joins 2 clauses e.g. I like cycling; I like eating.
Bryon who was 9 years old,got bullied at school. – remember commas around the parentheis – Bryon, who was 9 years old, got bullied at school.
My favourite superhero is spider-man -who had more than one movie-. The parenthesis doesn’t make sense at the end. It should be like this…. My favourite superhero – who had more than one movie – is spiderman.
Amazing sentences Ajay! I am so impressed! Well done! Here are a few corrections:
My friend zach was a very smart and caring. – no semi colon needed. It is just a simple sentence (1 clause). A semi colon joins 2 clauses e.g. I like cycling; I like eating.
Bryon who was 9 years old,got bullied at school. – remember commas around the parentheis – Bryon, who was 9 years old, got bullied at school.
My favourite superhero is spider-man -who had more than one movie-. The parenthesis doesn’t make sense at the end. It should be like this…. My favourite superhero – who had more than one movie – is spiderman.
Thanks Ajay, you’re kind and caring too!