Yet again, you have improved these sentences massively by using great verbs and adjectives! You even used onomatopoeia! All commas are correct again! My favourite word you used was hurtled!
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Yet again, you have improved these sentences massively by using great verbs and adjectives! You even used onomatopoeia! All commas are correct again!
My favourite word you used was hurtled!