Wow, well done Milly. This is a fantastic diary entry. You have included lots of detail from the book. It really gives the audience a sense of how excited Omri was. You have tried hard with your sentence structure and punctuation. A great job!
That’s a super diary entry Milly. You have shown how excited Omri was about his birthday and the gifts he had whether they were big or small. Great work Milly.
A super effort! You have tried really hard to include lots of details from the text and used them in your writing. I feel like you’ve really understood the characters feelings. Well done!
Wow, well done Milly. This is a fantastic diary entry. You have included lots of detail from the book. It really gives the audience a sense of how excited Omri was. You have tried hard with your sentence structure and punctuation. A great job!
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
That’s a super diary entry Milly. You have shown how excited Omri was about his birthday and the gifts he had whether they were big or small. Great work Milly.
Mrs Laishley
A super effort! You have tried really hard to include lots of details from the text and used them in your writing. I feel like you’ve really understood the characters feelings. Well done!
Mrs Bird