Ajay yr5
the ride was went up slowly, but went down like a shooting star shooting to earth, it went up down and side to side fastly fast,fast the ride went, dizzy,dizzy the people got.
Amazing poetry Ajay! I love you repetition and the simile you used!
thanks
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Ajay yr5
the
ride was
went up
slowly,
but went down like a shooting star shooting to earth,
it went up down and side to side fastly
fast,fast
the ride went,
dizzy,dizzy
the people got.
Amazing poetry Ajay! I love you repetition and the simile you used!
thanks