Hi Riley. I love your piece of writing it is very neat and well set out. I think you would have persuaded Baggins to join Gandalf.
Keep up the good work and stay safe.
Mrs Roberts.
Well done Riley! This is a fantastic piece of work. It is so neat and the paragraphs are really clear. You have used lots of persuasive features like flattery. I like the part where you call Bilbo brave and tell him he is the man for the job!
Keep up the hard work,
Mrs Arnold
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Hi Riley. I love your piece of writing it is very neat and well set out. I think you would have persuaded Baggins to join Gandalf.
Keep up the good work and stay safe.
Mrs Roberts.
Well done Riley! This is a fantastic piece of work. It is so neat and the paragraphs are really clear. You have used lots of persuasive features like flattery. I like the part where you call Bilbo brave and tell him he is the man for the job!
Keep up the hard work,
Mrs Arnold