Wow! Great improvement of the sick sentence Mili! I love all the adjectives you used! Next time could you use fronted adverbials e.g. With shaking hands,
AMAZING WORK! Just be careful of your spellings. I have corrected them below.
Spellings – castle, heart, opened, someone, walked
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Wow! Great improvement of the sick sentence Mili! I love all the adjectives you used! Next time could you use fronted adverbials e.g. With shaking hands,
AMAZING WORK! Just be careful of your spellings. I have corrected them below.
Spellings – castle, heart, opened, someone, walked