Well done Isla, this sounds very persuasive! You have tried hard to flatter Bilbo and have made the adventure sound so exciting! I like the sound of the fireworks!
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
I love the vocabulary you have used to try and persuade Bilbo!
Great to use a conclusion at the end to summarise your main points.
Mrs Bird
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Well done Isla, this sounds very persuasive! You have tried hard to flatter Bilbo and have made the adventure sound so exciting! I like the sound of the fireworks!
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
I love the vocabulary you have used to try and persuade Bilbo!
Great to use a conclusion at the end to summarise your main points.
Mrs Bird