Well done Riley, this is an excellent picture and description. It sounds very cosy and inviting! I like the idea of the rooms in different tunnels.
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
Excellent work Riley. I can tell you have chosen your vocabulary carefully to try and persuade people to buy your hobbit hole.
Great use of details.
Mrs Bird
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Well done Riley, this is an excellent picture and description. It sounds very cosy and inviting! I like the idea of the rooms in different tunnels.
Keep up the good work,
Mrs Arnold
Excellent work Riley. I can tell you have chosen your vocabulary carefully to try and persuade people to buy your hobbit hole.
Great use of details.
Mrs Bird