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– You used second person – you
– You used questions to persuade them
– You used brackets for extra info
– You used fronted adverbials
– You used speech
I love how you put a website at the bottom and I really want to ride Cherry Max. I love the free stuff you get on it too!
This is very impressive Isla! Well done!
THIS IS WHY IT IS AMAZING
– You used second person – you
– You used questions to persuade them
– You used brackets for extra info
– You used fronted adverbials
– You used speech
I love how you put a website at the bottom and I really want to ride Cherry Max. I love the free stuff you get on it too!
Thank you I liked the sound of Cherry Max as well it sounded very fun and like something I would ride on!
How much money is it? Will it be on the website! That is great Isla!
Yes all the prices are on the website!It is £25 each for a family.But people i know get a discount!
That’s a very good price! Your theme park will be the next best thing Isla!