Amazing improvement! I love how you used personification and made the sky has human features e.g. it punished people
Great adjectives you use too – stormy, gloomy
Thanks
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Amazing improvement! I love how you used personification and made the sky has human features e.g. it punished people
Great adjectives you use too – stormy, gloomy
Thanks