The Mountin

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3 Responses to The Mountin

  1. ABro says:

    Hi Milly, I LIKE YOUR POEM CAUSE IT RYMES.

  2. s14jlaishley says:

    That’s a great poem Milly. I love poetry that rhymes and the pictures really sum up your poem. Well done Milly.

    Mrs Laishley

  3. Mrs Arnold says:

    This is brilliant Milly! Well done. I love the way you have made it rhyme and have kept the sentence lengths similar – it’s quite a hard task! I really feel like I’m standing on top of the mountain.

    keep up the good work,

    Mrs Arnold

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