Wow another great story!
You have punctuated the speech correctly! You have used fronted adverbials followed by commas and you have used a range of subordinating conjunctions. You have listened to my feedback from before! I am impressed! Well done!
That was great Harvey. I liked how you used: ‘Clutches of evil,’. It made it really flow!
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Wow another great story!
You have punctuated the speech correctly! You have used fronted adverbials followed by commas and you have used a range of subordinating conjunctions. You have listened to my feedback from before! I am impressed! Well done!
That was great Harvey. I liked how you used: ‘Clutches of evil,’. It made it really flow!