I love the background! It really fits with the diary entry.
Well done for using parenthesis with the dashes! And well done for using the rhetorical question to get us thinking!
I really like the mysterious ending and your use of fronted adverbials!
Next time maybe try to use a : or ;
I love the backround it matches with the story my favourite bit was the ending because you used emotion and it was very mysterious.
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I love the background! It really fits with the diary entry.
Well done for using parenthesis with the dashes! And well done for using the rhetorical question to get us thinking!
I really like the mysterious ending and your use of fronted adverbials!
Next time maybe try to use a : or ;
I love the backround it matches with the story my favourite bit was the ending because you used emotion and it was very mysterious.