Wow what a great suspense story Harvey! I am so impressed. You have used some great new words like emotionless, haunted and sinister and you have used a range of conjunctions! I love the mysterious ending.
Thank you Miss Haines, I enjoyed writing this story!
I really enjoyed your story too, Harvey!
This was really good i like your story and you have used good words!
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Wow what a great suspense story Harvey! I am so impressed. You have used some great new words like emotionless, haunted and sinister and you have used a range of conjunctions! I love the mysterious ending.
Thank you Miss Haines, I enjoyed writing this story!
I really enjoyed your story too, Harvey!
This was really good i like your story and you have used good words!