wind poem by Aman

Posted on May 3, 2013 by 14AChana
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2 Responses to wind poem by Aman

  1. jack 4s says:
    May 3, 2013 at 8:49 am

    I like the flow in this one Noah.

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  2. william says:
    May 3, 2013 at 8:50 am

    Good use of personification

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