I like your poem Jack it is very good. In like the bit where it is wrapping around your body. The first stanzer is 6 beats long and the second is 7 beats long,therefore I think that the second stanzer is longer because it takes long for a snake to wrap around your body.
I love the similes that you have used!
I like youre first 4 lines jack
I like the way you describe the wind as a snake and
how it moves.
You have marked out the clauses useing commas like me!
I like your poem Jack it is very good. In like the bit where it is wrapping around your body. The first stanzer is 6 beats long and the second is 7 beats long,therefore I think that the second stanzer is longer because it takes long for a snake to wrap around your body.