Well Done for your piece of writing! I really like your similes, fronted adverbials and brackets. I like how you did the dot dot dot after a sentence. It made it more spooky. Also well done for using new vocabulary!
I really like your writing Jake!
Well Done!
wow! I like the use of the brackets, similes and Fronted adverbials.
I really like the adverbs and adjectives
AMAZING Work
Hi Jake hope you are having a lovely day!
Well Done for your piece of writing! I really like your similes, fronted adverbials and brackets. I like how you did the dot dot dot after a sentence. It made it more spooky. Also well done for using new vocabulary!
I really like your writing Jake!
Well Done!
From Borys