Lucas setting description

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2 Responses to Lucas setting description

  1. 14WHall says:

    I love the description on this peace of work if you keep it up you may be a famous writer

  2. Anonymous says:

    good job! I like that you used a metaphor. You described the old warehouse very well, I can imagine all the stacked boxes and the dust on the windowsill and on the floor.

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